Saturday, November 5, 2011

Wish You Dreamy Destination!

Hi there! 
Now I am presenting a two-stanza poem that I finished yesterday. As I went through an old comment of mine on a friend's post,
"Do keep on your creative journey to BEYOND IMAGINATION!
A friendly wish for you to get to your DREAMY DESTINATION!!" I came up with something that goes here~


Wish You Dreamy Destination





Friend, I can't say what your true dream is!
Fairy tale, realistic colors searching for sense!!
You experiment with feelings flying overseas!
Thoughts are twisted and outcomes so intense!!

O friend, I can't guess what your true dream is!
Your moves often feel me beyond imagination!!
Yes, it is pleasantly puzzling what exactly it is!
Anyway, I just wish you your dreamy destination!!


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8 comments:

  1. Balqis DBJNovember 5, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    So nice! That dreamy destination could be reached one day when it'll be a reality. :)

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  2. Geeta SinghNovember 5, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    Hope that our dreams will come true and we'll reach our dreamy destination someday:)
    wow ..rhyming liked it:)!!

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  3. KittyNovember 6, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    Dreams are like stars...you may never touch them, but if you follow them they will lead you to your destiny ! :)

    Beautiful ! :)

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  4. Suresh ShresthaNovember 6, 2011 at 3:32 AM

    @ Balqis - :) Everyone may have something like that, do you? If yes, let me wish you yours coming true! Liked it!! Thanks, Balqis! :)

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  5. Suresh ShresthaNovember 6, 2011 at 3:35 AM

    @ Geeta - So pleasant! Just hope and enjoy your journey ahead. But, never be in a hurry. Let your dream come true at its own pace! Thank you, Geeta! :)

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  6. Suresh ShresthaNovember 6, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    @ Kitty - Oh, really!! So subtle your words are! Follow your star and you will get to your dream, your destiny! So dream, star and destiny are interrelated! Thank you, Kitty! :)

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  7. ShahinNovember 6, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    I wonder the way your feelings are expressed through your writing...Awesome !!!

    kya kahu aap ki kavita ki tareef me,
    Dar hai kahi alfaz kam na pad jaye.

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  8. Suresh ShresthaNovember 6, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    I can't help wowing, Sober Shahin! :D

    Such a nice couple of poetic lines for the appreciation of the poem that was simply what came to my mind.

    Thanks a lot, friend! :)

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