HAIKU: Criticism, Plz!

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Hello there! J

The haiku served below is what my comment line “Criticism is the genuine window….” on one of your posts has led me to. Enjoy it and make some critical remarks as well, as suggested by the title!

Ha-ha-ha!! J

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Criticism, Plz!

Your criticism

My genuine correction

Make me grateful, Please!

Image: deviantART

HEARTACHES

As usual I have lately made a comment on one of the posts of a blogger friend; and as promised I have again appeared with something as the extension of my comment line 

"I don’t know Why my heart aches so".

 I hope you will like and enjoy  the HAIKU as much as the previous posts. If any suggestion, you will be highly appreciated. 

Spring airs zealously

Cuckoos coo; but I don’t know

Why my heart aches so!

Cool morning breeze fondles

Mind to bliss, but I don’t know

Why my heart aches so!

Flowers sway gently

Bees dance round, but I don’t know

Why my heart aches so!

Friends’ radiant smiles bring

Smile for me, yet I don’t know

Why my heart aches so!

Your warm behavior

Gifts good hopes, yet I don’t know

Why my heart aches so!